I always love your explanation for Lulu's heritage. And details like Lulu trying to dress in colorful clothes to distract from her unusual complexion is charming.
Your real strength is in imagery. I can see the glittering waters, the young Lulu who is starting to come into her own.
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25/7/11 18:02 (UTC)Your real strength is in imagery. I can see the glittering waters, the young Lulu who is starting to come into her own.
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